Thread:Maine12329/@comment-75.166.102.20-20140521215044/@comment-26391060-20140524060752

(well, or I'd update that after i see you update those content....but other can that, could you help re-word the change being made at here: www.baka-tsuki.org/project/index.php?title=No_Game_No_Life%3AVolume_2_Chapter_2&diff=355476&oldid=355137 to become more correct (in term of grammar and in term of accordance to the original material)? There're only one line.